Thursday, 30 June 2016

100 Word Challenge Of The Strange Hunted House



WALT use a range of parts of speech to add interest and detail.
Success Criteria: I will be successful when I have...
used two or more similes.
used three examples of onomatopoeia.
used one or more examples of personification.

I found it tricky to change some thing because I didn't write everything in my book but I wrote 100 words instead to much.ra

Monday, 27 June 2016

Matariki Acrostic Poem


    WALT: Write an  acrostic poem about Matariki.
    I know I have been successful because...
  • I have written a sentence for each letter.
  • The first word of each sentence starts with a letter from ‘Matariki’.
  • I have written about the main features of Matariki.
  • My writing makes sense.

My Reflection
I found it tricky to write a letter for every word because I had to think about a  new thing for each letter my next steps are to think about some thing new in my head so I don´t wast time.

Best Mates



WALT make connections (both implicit and explicit) in the text
Success Criteria - I will be successful when...
I can use personal experiences to connect ideas in the text (text to self)
I can use prior knowledge to connect ideas in the text (text to world)
I found it tricky to relate to some things my next step are to focus on what I am doing so I do not wast time.

Friday, 17 June 2016

Peddle Power




I learned how to ride a bike again and I had a lot of fun. My favourite thing was I staned and peddled on the bike .

Thursday, 16 June 2016

The Strange And Mysterys Forest





WALT:Use strategies to add detail to our writing.


[Success Criteria]
I have used 5 W's and an H.
I used some of my 5 senses.
                            
My Reflection: I was learning to use describing words to give my writing more meaning.I found this easy because I did 221 words and I had to do 100 words. Next time I will keep track of how much words I write and I will use more of my senses.

Term 2 Week 7 Dear Diary

Dear  Diary in school lots of things happen on Tuesday after lunch every body in year 4,5,6 go into different class's for some time to do stuff. I go to room 21 to do Japaneses we have learned the alphabet and other stuff.

Monday, 13 June 2016

Measurement




WALT: Compare and measure length and height in different ways.

I found it a little hard because it was hard to measure my body length and my arm length.I will try to go home and learn about measurement so it is easier.  
[success criteria]
I have measured my height and length in hands,meters and centimetres.
I can say what shape my arms and height make me.

Grandpa's Slippers


WALT: Make and justify inferences.
I found this tricky  because it took longer then I expected. I will try to write faster so I don't wast time so I can finish it quicker.

Friday, 3 June 2016

Ruby Clinic


I had lots of fun at the rugby clinic and did a lot of things. I liked playing sky tower because I got to run a lot and had a lot of fun.