100 Word Challenge Of The Strange Hunted House

WALT use a range of parts of speech to add interest and detail.
Success Criteria: I will be successful when I have...
used two or more similes.
used three examples of onomatopoeia.
used one or more examples of personification.

I found it tricky to change some thing because I didn't write everything in my book but I wrote 100 words instead to much.ra